Comments on: 54 – Fade to Black

By: Simon

Simon — Mon, 24 Aug 2009 18:52:44 +0000

Enjoyed the expression on Ugo’s face in the penultimate pic – he doesn’t look too worried!

By: Tom

Tom — Tue, 11 Nov 2008 12:44:44 +0000

Thanks Mike, exactly what I was going for.

By: Mike Sieber

Mike Sieber — Tue, 11 Nov 2008 12:43:50 +0000

Love the way you handled the last two panels. Very cinematic.

By: Tom

Tom — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 23:56:10 +0000

Okay Daniel, you have earned the nickname “Eagle Eye” – you don’t miss anything! John is squinting his one eye, but it came out looking weird when reduced.

I colored the cube a bit different yes, but it’s the same cube.

By: Daniel Senpai

Daniel Senpai — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 23:54:23 +0000

that looks like a different cube to me…

and is john’s eye an x

By: Tom

Tom — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 21:04:21 +0000

Thanks Kelsey – I am so glad you noticed the “O” I like to put stuff like that in, always hoping someone will catch on to the little stuff.

I can tell you that this is a pivotal moment in the story. Stay tuned.

By: Kelsey

Kelsey — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 19:50:46 +0000

WOP is my new favorite sound effect!

Originally I thought the bubbles were science magic from Ril fiddling with the puzzle, but the text in the last panel corrected me a second later. I think I assumed she was fiddling with it because she was touching it with both hands in the third-to-last (fourth? fifth?) panel.

Filling in the last O was an excellent choice!

By: Tom

Tom — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 17:32:23 +0000

Thanks Danny, I wasn’t sure if it would work or not, and I was freaked out about doing it because once I did it – there was no going back! (I inked it that way).

By: danny zabbal

danny zabbal — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 17:29:01 +0000

Wha–?! What happened?

BTW love the mystery-pass-out-ink-bubbles.

By: bachterman

bachterman — Mon, 10 Nov 2008 12:26:47 +0000

bob got bent some sproickets