68 – You Deserve More

More with the brush pen, but with some added work with a .7 as well. I still need more varied lines. Tried the digital pen for some shading – lots to learn. On the last two panels, I wanted you to get a sense that you were Asimov in panel 3 and John in 4, so you were actually receiving the line. Not sure how that works.


Discussion (19) ¬

  1. Salvatore Iovene

    Funny strip :) Although I didn’t get the sense you mention about panel 3 and 4. I believe the reason is that John is a good foot taller than Asimov, but the POVs of the two panels are basically the same, only inverted along the axis that conjuncts John and Asimov.

  2. bachterman

    it works great! :)

  3. tyler_durden

    awwwwww…a touching moment.
    i knew it would happen sooner or later.

  4. alecho

    hug hug hug!

  5. Wit

    Awe c’mon, Asimov. Robots need love too. Even if it’s sweaty man love.

  6. Tom

    Maybe he’s afraid sweaty man love will rust his innards. :D

  7. tpiro

    Between the combination of line work and coloring, I think this is one of your best art efforts yet.

  8. Tom

    Thanks Tony! I’m going to stick with this direction and see where it goes. Going to work some different line weight pens in too. Figuring out brushes to use with the digital pen is my biggest challenge at the moment.

  9. danny zabbal

    Aw come on Asimov, even robots get hugs every once in a while :)

    BTW, I like that sky. Very subtle.

  10. danny zabbal

    Wow, I just realized that Wit and I made the same comment? Great minds think alike, huh?

  11. Tom

    Thanks D – I just noticed I got some banding there on the export… rats, I’ll have to fix that.

  12. Tom

    LOL! It sounds to me like your both very concerned about two men sharing love… I’m not sayin…I’m just sayin…

  13. Irma

    Haha! The last panel had me LOLing.

    I’m REALLY looking forward to seeing what’s going to happen…

  14. Tom

    Thanks Irma, the highest praise! Lots of good stuff for you guys in store.

  15. Chris

    The new style looks great and today’s strip was amusing. I agree with @Salvatore that I wasn’t really feeling it from the different perspectives and it was probably a height thing.

  16. Tom

    Well as long as you got a kick out of it, that’s all that matters. :)

  17. Kelsey

    I am in favor of the new art styling! The thick wobbly lines remind me of liquorice.

    I didn’t get the sense you described, probably because of John’s head being perpetually off-center. I can see how that might be a problem–I always have trouble with converting 2D compositions (especially faces with long noses =/) to 3D shapes that look okay at any angle.

  18. Tom

    John is one of those characters that can only be drawn in certain poses. Kind of something I have to deal with.

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