161 – Back to the Beats

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This one was tough but fun. Thanks to Steve for helping me out with some figure issues and special effects stuff.

Previously on Marooned…

While attempting to send a message to Earth, John fell ill. Ugo brought him to the Volotrum (also called The Dark Ones), his only remaining chance to be healed. The Listener, an apprentice of the Dark Ones – a human woman named Lian Fisher who crashed on Mars years ago – agreed to heal John. In doing so, she has fallen into some kind of coma. Meanwhile, the dangerous Krosa have attacked, and John, Ugo and Asimov are trying to help the Dark Ones repel them.

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Discussion (13) ¬

  1. Chris

    I feel like she’s gonna bust out some dance moves pretty soon, all this talk about following the beat and what not. Please please please don’t let her start doing the moon/mars walk. John maybe but definitely not Lian.

    I do love the effects in the last panel, that would make a great iPhone background!

  2. Major Tom

    No dancing! :) I will definitely make that into an iPhone bg.

  3. Nixon

    yay she stepped into the light:)…
    the last panel definetly is a cool background or cover for something..it has this superhero feel to it ..very powerful pose!…i bet she’ll be kicking some aliens behinds soon…
    the tension is building up very well there!…too bad its only monday yet :D

  4. Og

    Just fantastic.

    “You’ve just taken your first step into a larger world.”

    :)

  5. Major Tom

    Thanks guys! Glad you like it. One of my faves so far.

  6. Tony

    Wow, great looking update! Bravo!

  7. Major Tom

    Thanks Tony :)

  8. dgriff13

    phenomenal job on the last panel, wow!

  9. Chris

    Neat trick on Asimov’s screen showing the number of comments on a post. Nice creative use of the space there!

  10. Thomas

    Wow Tom! Really good job on the lighting. It must be hard to do that.

  11. Major Tom

    Thanks Chris – wanted to do something different there.

    Thanks Thomas! It’s not too hard. Ask your Dad ;)

  12. noone

    looks like she is changing into a hero.

  13. Major Tom

    @Dawn – thanks, and I don’t know why your comments got hung up in spam – they should be approved now!